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Copy Matters: YETI’s “Rare Air”

Copy Matters: YETI’s “Rare Air”

April 6, 2018January 31, 2023 Cherith AndesBlog, Copy Cat, Marketingcopy writing, creative ideas, Marketing, Raleigh PR Agency, Yeti

I’ll have to rope a nameless good friend into this post. Friend X has a small penchant for YETI products. And by “small” I mean “monopolizing the kitchen cabinet at an impressive pace.” Truth be told, I’m begrudgingly jealous of his pristine collection of excursion-ready coolers, cups, bags and buckets — in three rugged colors.

His most recent order included the stainless-steel Rambler Colster koozie (in Brick Red). But for once, it wasn’t the YETI product that captured my attention.

It was the little something extra in the YETI.

Instead of simply shipping the koozie, YETI maximized every square inch of its package to showcase its brand personality. The Colster contained what appeared at first behest to be an empty aluminum can. But upon perusing the label, the pop top can offered a treasure.

Behold, friends. A can of Rare Air.

The label touts the contents so convincingly that I almost popped the top. Quippy copy grabs the eye by underscoring the content’s premium nature (“Rare”) and purity (“100 % Wild”, because I prefer my air captured fresh from the forest, thank-you-very-much). And considering it’s undiluted, the can reminds us to “Please Breathe Responsibly”.

And trust you’re about to enjoy some of the finest vapors on the market.

Wanna confirm the serving size and nutrition facts? Just check the side.

And don’t worry. The Powers That Be have your back with the requisite Government Warning. PS: It’s about bees.

Government Warning: This can may contain traces of moose breath, porcupine dander, poison ivy, or a swarm of angry bees. There’s an off chance the bees are friendly. Either way, this can probably contains bees.”

Lessons?

Empty space isn’t dead.

Approach your business promotions with a keen eye, seeking unused spaces to tout your brand.

Don’t reinvent the wheel. Rebrand it.

YETI didn’t develop an entirely new widget to shove into the Colster. Instead, it followed logic, leveraging the Colster’s natural use. From here, they maximized clever copy, witty words and catchy concepts to pack a punch.

Words matter.

The idea might have been cute at best with heavy-handed language. (Insert cliches, cue eye rolls.) What finished this package was not what was said but how. The similarities between Rare Air and other beverages’ claims were so striking that who knows; it might very well jumpstart an air-drinking fad!

You have “empty space”? We have ideas. Shoot us a line to see how we can help!

 

 

 

 

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Copy Cat: Hallmark Hacks

Copy Cat: Hallmark Hacks

November 30, 2017January 31, 2023 Cherith AndesBlog, Copy Cat, Marketingad copy, ad writing, copy cat, copy writing, marketing writing, pr strategy, PR writing

The perfect birthday card. Ah, the elusive unicorn of celebrations and parties. I cringe to count how many hours I’ve spent in Target deliberating between this cutesy shoe motif, this edgy humorous layout or that blasé cake/candles/my-how-good-you-look card. While I’m sure its no easy feat churning out hundreds of soiree-themed slogans, birthday cards seem to strike the perfect (or imperfect!) balance of cheesy and cliche.

…until a recent afternoon in Rite Aid, of all the places. I stumbled on a card brand that snagged my attention but not just because of the clever copy.

It was the placeholder behind each card that piqued my interest.

When a particular card runs out, Shoebox — a Hallmark brand –– leverages this empty space as an opportunity to engage with customers and showcase its voice. Shoebox touts itself as “the perfect way to make someone laugh out loud. These sometimes edgy, irreverent takes on real life are surprising, hilarious, often inappropriate and always timely.”

The empty card slots were slathered with copy like this:

In a word: unexpected. In two: delightfully unexpected.

The witty whims were a surprise almost as much as the creative placement. So a big thumbs up to Shoebox for spying this opportunity to make an impression and increase a form of dialogue with its customer base. I’ll certainly be checking out the Shoebox cards section before my next birthday bash.

And that’s not all. Want to see our favorite (and not-so-favorite) copy? Check out other copy cat blogs!

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Customer Service+Good Copy=Rockstar

Customer Service+Good Copy=Rockstar

January 23, 2017January 31, 2023 Dana PhelpsBlog, Copy Cat, Marketing

I love Medlin-Davis Cleaners. When I moved to Cameron Village last year, I gave the location there a try because it was convenient. When I emailed with some feedback on my first experience, I got a phone call from the owner. He was incredibly courteous and extremely helpful when he explained to me that there is more than one way to have my work dresses and suits cleaned. It was superb customer service at it’s finest. I’ve been a loyal customer ever since.

Extra kudos to Medlin-Davis for creative email blasts such as this one. “We Tailor Swift(ly)” caught my attention while hopefully avoiding any risk of being contacted by Taylor Swift’s legal team that allegedly stays at the ready. The copy that followed read, “We’re not imposters; we just know that when you need a garment altered, you need it done quickly. We can’t sing or play guitar, but we’ve got the fastest alterations service around.”

In addition to Medlin-Davis giving good clothes cleaning, they give good copy! Need some inspiration for your own copy writing? Check out our other Copy Cat posts.

Image from Medlin-Davis e-blast.

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Copy Cat: Support Ninjas

Copy Cat: Support Ninjas

August 1, 2016January 31, 2023 Cherith AndesBlog, Copy Cat, Marketingcopy, online content, web content, web copy, writing copy, writing tips

I thought Domino’s had stolen my heart when it launched the pizza tracker  — complete with customizable themes. Themes, people! I’m fairly sure my pizza-per-day ratio skyrocketed just so I could watch that parrot squawk updates about my pepperoni-with-extra-cheese creation.

And all was right in the universe…until I discovered Eat24 by Yelp. Concept? Online food delivery. Price? A touch higher (to account for outsourced delivery fees, understandably). Copy? My new favorite.

Eat24’s website is proliferated with promotional phrases that tout the usual products for a website of its ilk (fast delivery, an easy app, reliable reviews). But the copy’s unexpected and playful nature combined with the punchy brevity transforms it from advertisement into entertainment.

Need help? Don’t bother calling anything so stodgy as a “customer service representative.” No, Eat24 employs “support ninjas.” I almost want to invent a problem just to find out what that phone call entails.

Support Ninjas

Once you submit that order, you’re normally hit with a “thanks, and we’ll get it to you shortly.” Not with Eat24. Your order sparks cosmic celebration.

T-Rex

Looking to download the Eat24 app? It’s not a gaming app, but after the copy’s humorous jab about the chopsticks, you don’t really care.

Eat24 App

Just one more example how good, well-targeted writing never goes out of style! Check out some of Clairemont’s other favorite Copy Cat picks!

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Copy Cat: Catchy and Clever

Copy Cat: Catchy and Clever

July 19, 2016January 31, 2023 Sarah HattmanBlog, Copy Cat, Restaurant PR + Hospitality PRadvertising, bbq, City Barbecue, copy, restaruant pr

Whether you have heard the 1981 hit song Jenny or seen the 2012 movie For a Good Time, Call, you’re probably familiar with the phrase, “For a good time call…” And you probably know that it is one you likely don’t want your name or number to follow – or maybe you do.

A couple of weeks ago as I was walking into City Barbecue, a sign in the window caught my attention. It read, “For a good time call Greg…” and listed a phone number. I continued reading and quickly realized that it was promoting the restaurant’s catering and delivery services, and I couldn’t help but smile.

In my opinion, this copy is spot on in regards to conveying its message. Not only does it walk the line between fun and risque, it also uses a catchy phrase that will help people remember the restaurant. I know City Barbecue will be the first establishment that comes to my mind the next time I am in need of a caterer.

Where have you seen good copy lately? Share it with us on Twitter!

 

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